Tuesday, November 9, 2010

Year 6 leaving

I am leaving Riverdale school thinking that I have achieved lots like being the 3 best a high jump not in counting teachers. I think that room 13 is the best class room because of TC and the things we do like quiddage because we learn life skills. some of my favour memories was camping sports games and friends. I'v been in rooms 4,2,7,8,9,TLE,10 and 13. Riverdale school is cool because of the things we do and the teachers we have and being a year 6 we have lots of opportunities and I will mess Riverdale as I leve to go to intermedi

Wednesday, November 3, 2010

self assessment for speach

Speeches

Written and Oral Language

We are learning to:

* Present material, conveying meaning clearly and accurately

* Write and speak, expressing personal viewpoints, sequencing ideas logically

Speech Topic:


Self Assessment from video

Speech in front of class

Success Criteria:

Speech Writing

My speech followed the hamburger technique and was logically sequenced



The point I was making was easy to understand

1/2

yes

My speech contained research

yes

yes

My speech had voice and was interesting

yes

yes

My speech was in my words

yes

yes

My big idea comes through strongly

1/2

yes

Presentation

I enunciated my words clearly



Terminal consonants


Ts and ds in the middles of words


Swallowed my goobies first


Seperated my words


My voice was loud enough

yes

yes

I learnt my speech off by heart

1/2

yes

I used expression in my voice

yes

1/2

I used enough volume to be heard by all

yes

yes

I used eye-contact

yes

yes

My speech was not too fast, not too slow

yes

yes

My speech was between 2 and 3 minutes

yes

yes

My presentation materials supported but didn’t repeat my words



Total:

10

11 1/2

Novice – 5 Apprentice – 6 Practitioner – 11 Expert – 14

Self Assessment after Video

Self Assessment after Speech

Tuesday, November 2, 2010

Speech video

video

I think that I did good I spoke clear