Wednesday, June 23, 2010

Tuesday, June 22, 2010

My writing

what is my next learning step? to have neter writing
what did I do well? I put a onomatopoeia in it
what will I do better next time? trey to have a simile

Sunday, June 20, 2010

My best visual languge

I piked this piece because it explains what the writing is about

Thursday, June 3, 2010

my cross country

what did I do well? I think that I did lots of laps
What will I do better next time? I will make my writing more naet
What is my next loaning step?